I kinda traced over original picture though... This was another style I felt like doing because when I made her anime-ish it looked very scary! So it's kind of realistic. Until I drew the nose... I can't draw noses. Remember not to steal!
Looks pretty good!
i think your proportions in the face are really good as well as the body proportion in relationship to your head. that is half the battle for most of us and you got it down. the lines are a little rough(had the same issue in my last portrait pic) and found if you use the smudge tool it gives the lines a much smoother look while toning down the intensity of the black. as for the hair i love the color it really complements her color in her face. again the smudge tool will be your best friend especially when you want that texture of hair and dont be afraid to egsagerate her hair a bit. play around with the different brushes and make a tone of duplicate layers that way if you mess up you dont have to start back at the beginning. i do really like this piece and cant wait to see more!